Reviews for Lethal Beauty
Loveyourstory chapter 4 . 6/14/2018
MAKE MORE CHAPTERS PLZ
One Winged A2 chapter 2 . 3/3/2018
And the plot thickens...
So glad I hit the follow button for this.
I feel bad for Kratos. He's stuck between a rock and a hard place, isn't he?
hannahisnotarealperson chapter 1 . 3/1/2018
Reimagined fairy tales, gotta love them. I love the vampire-y/demon-y vibe we get from Snow White at the beginning, and the contrast between her brutality and then her sibling's playful banter and their friendly interactions.
If I were to be mean and add a tiny constructive criticism I'd say it was a touch heavy on the dialogue, but it works for the opening chapter, because it's allowing the reader to see the interactions between characters so if it is a little heavy on it, it's only slightly!
Looking forward to seeing this develop!
Han x
One Winged A2 chapter 1 . 2/26/2018
Whelp, your first review!
I absolutely love this take on the classic fairy tale. The idea of a cruel, sadistic version of Snow White is just spectacular.
Though I do have one slight issue.
If Snow had been an instrument of chaos and destruction for that many years, why did the king let her do so much damage for so long and try so hard to 'correct' her? She was clearly a monster, and one that needed putting down before it got out of control.
Apart from that, I love what you have set up, and I can't wait to see what you have planned next.
Best,
-DPLxBeAsTxSnIpE