|Reviews for The Devil's fingers|
| MaryAlexCooper chapter 1 . 3/6
So much rich detail! I love it! Your writing has so much personality, you say so much without having to say much really. I'm interested to see where this story is going. Does the cigarette have a supernatural aspect in this story? Is it a literal demon possessing them? Oh my goodness I'm excited.
It did get a little confusing with the part with Michelle talking to her new boyfriend Derek with the flip-flops of her contemplating other things during their conversation. But still, I love the style. Great job!