|Reviews for Secrets of the Crown|
| Timbo Slice chapter 1 . 3/6
This is an interesting piece. Right off the bat I liked the characterization of Aurelia, how stern and resourceful yet tender in her love for the orphans. I think you did a good job weaving in tidbits of her background into the overall plot, which gave the story an easy flow to the writing. The overall plot does seem captivating also, with political intrigue set in a fatastical world. Speaking of fantasy i did like the world building you're crafting as well which is sure to play a bigger part in upcoming chapters and the magical elements such as her teleportation jewel and shape shifting has more of a subtle approach to their application, suggesting that Aurelia is highly trained in their uses, a powerful and benevolent sorceress perhaps.
Overall I think this was a well done first chapter and hope you continue!
| RedPanda3296 chapter 1 . 3/6
Not bad. Not bad. An interesting tale, to say the least. Let's see where it goes, hmm?