|Reviews for Man in the woods|
| IronicPuppies chapter 1 . 3/9/2018
An interesting story. I like the supernatural feel of it and the ending is uplifting.
One thing that I think might be improved is showing why the man is so regretful. It seems like he blames himself for the death of his wife but I’m not sure why. Did he make some decision that led to his wife falling ill or something of that sort. If that is mad clearer then I think the reader will better understand why the man is lives like this.
| ryanCblackburn chapter 1 . 3/6/2018
You have a solid premise and I enjoyed the aspect of reliving specific moments to trigger the desired memory. The story flowed smoothly between past and present.
There are punctuation/capitalization/grammar errors that you will want to correct prior to submitting to a contest, however.