|Reviews for A New Beginning|
| brokentearss chapter 1 . 3/8
Omg I love your story, despite the format loooool anyways wonderfully written can't wait to see more. also login good the character names man, so many emotions
| Erena Adison chapter 1 . 3/7
The formatting with your story seems to be off.
"style"margin-bottom: .07in; line-height" This is in front of every line.
I just noticed and though I would let you know.
Your story is interesting so far.