|Reviews for The World in the Mirror|
| lunzvsiwtcgk chapter 1 . 1/5/2019
Enjoyed the narration in this one. All very humorous and with quite some... surprise. [The girl turned to look at her, and Mackaelah got a shock. It was a boy!] - I genuinely broke down into snickers at this one.
Cut... hands. Wow. That got dark pretty quick.
Lol, names! And I'm amused by how she thinks planes work like hot air balloons.
Ahah, at least she's good at pruning roses. Despite her problematic personality, I think it's pretty sweet for her to help the prince, even if it's for a selfish purpose. It reminds me of Alice in the Queen of Heart's rose garden for some reason, though.
["The council has reached a decision. We are going to war against the Fair Folk," said Diar.] - Lol. That escalated quickly.
[She wished she hadn't asked.] - xD
[ "I was lying. About planes."] - xD
Charming little piece. I genuinely enjoyed myself reading it. Cheers~
| lirianstar chapter 1 . 4/3/2018
I want more of this!
The interactions between Mac/Gwen (I think I should call her that lol) & Huir...were so so funny!
Maybe she can keep visiting him? Would make fun series!
| IronDog chapter 1 . 3/8/2018
For a story that was essentially a series of nonsensical scenes thrown together, that was quite moving and believably written. The characters were fun and Mackaelah's character development outweighed the lack of it in other areas. I enjoyed it a great deal more than expected. Thank-you for sharing