Reviews for Wishes and Bottles |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Wow I didn't even know you'd updated the story past chapter 18 until now. For your first time writing this kind of scene, you did really well, so well done. Can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() More of your trademark hilarious character dynamics on show in this chapter. I know how you feel about the extensive workload, but keep going! An update every once in a while is way better than none at all! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good to see this coming back! Once again the teasing dynamic between Kizer and the Genies is done very well. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So our protagonists have just been pawns in a much greater game? Interesting, and a very unexpected plot twist. I can't wait to see where things go from here! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Minerva is a badass, it's safe to say. Honestly, your fight scenes keep getting better and better to the point where it's not even a weakness. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() An amazing mid-boss rematch with Shmidt, and an attractive new genie for Kizer :D will his harem never end? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your fight scenes are definitely improving! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Weaver was so cool, you really do come up with awesome characters :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Once again you excel at character dynamics. Also, just as soon as I was saying he's a wimp, Kizer proves he's not as much of a pushover as I thought ;) Nice chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Winter seems badass already. Kizer, however... All I'll say is I hope through the course of the story he gets a bit less wimpy and more worthy of his genie harem :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ayyy, guess I was right to root for Jasmine ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() The dynamic between your three characters is amazing, I am personally a fan of Rally over Jazz but that could change. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Found this through a mutual friend of ours (Oracle)'s profile and I have to say, I'm interested. Your writing style is great and the premise is interesting. I like it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, if nothing else, ya got the castle. I mean you're still a slave to the will of a jackass monarch and your genies are bickering more than ever, but hey. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's good to see that the genies are now working together quite admirably in a fight. It'll be good to see how powerful they've become in future battles! |