Reviews for War for the Found
asironchariots chapter 1 . 4/16/2018
This is beautiful! I love the ending! Your rhyming scheme is good too, although I would suggest working on your rhythm a little more. Each line has an inconsistent amount of syllables, which make the flow of the poem choppy. Other than that, it's great work! :)
Coelia James chapter 1 . 3/31/2018
Loved it! I like how it brings into perspective that though won, and I believe the war has been won and we redeemed, the battle rages on. It was good to be reminded of it. Thank you!