Reviews for Miranda's Choice
zagato chapter 1 . 4/12/2019
Miranda must be Rosie, and Rosie is Miranda.
Sarah chapter 1 . 6/26/2018
Please update longer!
God Speaking chapter 1 . 3/30/2018
I'm confused. Who's Miranda?
Anyways, this wasn't fully realized enough. The storytelling format like it's from a script or something rubs off to me as lazy. Maybe add some descriptions and world-building and not throw exposition out everywhere the first few sentences. "Show, don't tell."
I hope to see improvement. Goodluck!