|Reviews for E-Soul|
| Sherlock D Holmes chapter 30 . 12/12/2019
I really think you should be posting this on other websites as well, like royalroad.
I honestly don't really understand why your story doesn't get so much attention. (YOU HAVE ONE REVIEWER FFS), and it kinda bums me out, lol, since I sorta enjoyed it when the story first came out a while ago.
So yeah, you've got, what, two followers and favorites, and the story is not at all bad in my opinion. Just, uh, a little cliche'd, I guess, but that can't be helped.
I may be projecting, since I absolutely hate writing for a tiny audience, but if you're looking to get more readers or more comments in general, royalroad is the place.
Lol, I'm just now realizing how sketchy/shilly my review is. Well, that's my advice. Take it from a guy who hasn't logged into his fictionpress account for almost over a year, just so he could tell you how dry this website is.
| I am so confused chapter 4 . 4/11/2018
Is his name Kairu? Is it Keiru?
Who the fuck is Takeshi, I thought the main guy's name was Takahata?