Reviews for The Hole (Short story - Complete)
Darkgenius3 chapter 1 . 4/12/2018
Terrifying. I'm reading this in school, and I'm shaking, and holy crap, Steven King could take a lesson from this. I'm slightly claustrophobic, and I love animals, and gaaahhhhh. It's good, don't get me wrong, I love this. But geezzz. Though I guess that's the whole point of horror. :) Are you going to continue it?
NikNak13 chapter 1 . 4/4/2018
This was so freaking scary! Every time she went a bit further or took another tunnel, my mind was crying out for her to stop. I understand how it could be dream-inspired though; most people wouldn't make the decision of crawling down a muddy tunnel, but you can't control what happens in dreams. I kept thinking she was going to run into something nasty down there!
I love my little cat too, but there's no way I'm following her down a hole now!