Reviews for Execration
Abstract Reality chapter 1 . 4/23/2018
Greetings, fellow web dweller! I'm delighted that you finally decided it was time to post an original work to the ether! I for one was not disappointed. I find Ray to be quite an interesting character in terms of how he perceives his surroundings and the little quirks that exist in his character. He is quite analytical and yet withdrawn - a natural response to the past he endured. I also appreciate how you jumped right into the story without unnecessary introductions. You'll learn more about Ray as you go on with the plot. You provided quite a few items that I would like to have more fleshed out as you keep writing. I'm so glad you took the plunge. Now it's time to keep up on the sharing!