Reviews for The Skywatcher
Magnolia B chapter 1 . 4/22/2018
Really cool. You sucked me in with the moment where he meets the panel. If you ever wanted to expand on this, that would be an awesome starting place. I'd love to see that moment fully played out. The part about the teacher's moving the test returns back was clever. Only constructive crit I've got is that I thought "Rubius" in the first line was a person for quite some time. If you had said "planet," I would have more immediately fallen into what was going on. Good stuff!