Reviews for Rules
LeagionFear chapter 1 . 4/23/2018
'a lot of sigh'? What does that mean?
'Guide ones' I don't understand this either...
'Nor any complicated guide ones, when you make them.' This doesn't make any sense... The sentences within a poem can be tinkered with grammatically, but must have meaning or direction that, perhaps not on first look, should be clear to the reader. I'm just confused at the moment, which stops me from enjoying the poem.