Reviews for Dream
LeagionFear chapter 1 . 4/24/2018
Nicely done. *tips hat*
Though the first comma would be better placed after silently. I find it helps if you write it out as a normal sentence;
'The moonlight came in silently, as I lay in bed, dreaming of you'
Then divide it into the poem;
'The moonlight came in
silently, as I lay in
bed, dreaming of you'
I like it.