|Reviews for At the Still Point of the Turning World|
| lunzvsiwtcgk chapter 1 . 1/6/2019
[He'd never given it much thought until the murders started...] - Welp. That got dark quickly.
["...So Death locked him in a mirror."] - Death? *The* Death? :D
You keep teasing us with stories that hinted at awesome stuff following them, hue. How mischievous. c:
| Zukafu Chiriamoto chapter 1 . 5/9/2018
The idea you've proposed here sounds super exciting. A rag-tag team going after mirror shards to stop a big bad villain of winter? That is quite up my street and if you ever got around to writing that, I would be very eager to read.
I think you're right in your own observation - the POV changes are not necessary. They don't add anything that couldn't come across in third person through description or some more on the characterisation.
Otherwise, I thought this was pretty good. I rather enjoyed it.