Reviews for Im mortal
AvegaLil chapter 1 . 5/2/2021
I fell in love with the story from beginning to end! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to or
PatGo chapter 1 . 4/23/2021
I can't get enough of your book. The storytelling is just perfect. Why don't you try to join NovelStar's writing competition?
TS Conlon chapter 2 . 5/30/2018
The magic system is interesting. I like the concept of marking someone with magic in the past, only to have those events happen in the future. You've worked around the grandfather's paradox wonderfully.

The world itself seems very modern, but with a fantasy twist. Maybe not current-modern, but not medieval. This is only the second chapter in, so I'm wondering what you have in mind for your world building and where the story will go from here.
TS Conlon chapter 1 . 5/7/2018
Um ... what just happened? The details are clear, the descriptions thoughtful, the characters interesting, and the hooks are mysterious and I hope rewarding. It's clear this comes from a mature, more controlled Bex. It's wonderful, and I can't wait to read more.