Reviews for Goddess' Landing
lucia1156 chapter 1 . 4/18
The story is powerful, I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
Sir Scott chapter 13 . 7/23/2018
This was a pretty deep chapter. It was very philosophical and quite fascinating.
~Sir Scott
Sir Scott chapter 12 . 7/10/2018
That's a pretty good cliffhanger. I like the demonstration of how they got manna from the crystals.
~Sir Scott
Sir Scott chapter 11 . 7/3/2018
Good chapter. I like how there is plenty of action. I can't wait to hear Silt and Lou answer Ripley's questions.
~Sir Scott
Sir Scott chapter 10 . 6/27/2018
Nice update. It was interesting to read a battle using technology and magic.
~Sir Scott
Sir Scott chapter 9 . 6/19/2018
Pretty intriguing ritual. It seems that Ripley has matured some. I liked how you ended is chapter with a cliffhanger.
~Sir Scott
Sir Scott chapter 8 . 6/11/2018
I enjoyed reading the mythology of this world.
~Sir Scott
Sir Scott chapter 7 . 6/5/2018
Good update. Silt is a good addition to the group, although, she comes with a lot of baggage.
~Sir Scott
Sir Scott chapter 6 . 5/28/2018
I knew the thief was a girl, but still an interesting chapter. I liked all the charms that she had hanging off her chainmail.
~Sir Scott
Sir Scott chapter 5 . 5/22/2018
That shadow moved fast. Good chapter. I like the magic system in this story.
~Sir Scott
Sir Scott chapter 4 . 5/18/2018
It was an interesting exchange between Lou and Ripley. I'm curious about how Lou learned so much magic.
~Sir Scott
Sir Scott chapter 3 . 5/17/2018
That was a pretty good fight and exchange. The mercenary seems like a cool character.
~Sir Scott
Sir Scott chapter 2 . 5/16/2018
I was worried for a second that they were going to blow themselves up. I look forward to reading more.
~Sir Scott
Sir Scott chapter 1 . 5/15/2018
A pretty intriguing story. I hope you write more soon. I'm very curious about that box.
~Sir Scott