Reviews for Lin
morixxx chapter 1 . 4/11/2019
I'm shock! An air of melancholy surrounded me. It is like I'm not okay today, but soon, maybe, I will learn to accept the reality. The question rings in my head like "are we born to die or we die to live." Which one is it?
He he he... Sorry. I'm such a dramatic person.
I don't want to suck it up. There's a lot of things to deal with and that is to continue doing what you love while you are still alive and kicking.
Critic chapter 1 . 6/5/2018
Perhaps a continuation will bring out the picture.
CitrusChickadee chapter 1 . 5/27/2018
Wow, the amount of emotion in the first couple of paragraphs is amazing! A good reaction to the shock, I think. And of course the irony in the first paragraph of the letter, since obviously she is shocked by it. If there's one critique I have, there's a "with" in the first sentence that I'm not sure if it should be there, but other than that this is pretty good!