Reviews for Once Upon a Summer Day
SaltwaterJanuary chapter 9 . 3/31/2019
Again, another very sweet chapter! Their feeoings for each other come off in a very cute, sincere way.
SaltwaterJanuary chapter 8 . 3/31/2019
This was such a cute chapter- andI'm relieved that things look well for them. I think in part of the italics-thoughts you put third person, just to note. But other than that, it was a smooth chapter.
SaltwaterJanuary chapter 7 . 2/3/2019
I like the way Luke is so concerned with good impressions, while Mace is still playing hard to get. It's a good contrast, in a way.
SaltwaterJanuary chapter 6 . 1/13/2019
This chapter was pretty funny (though I'm not quite certain about Cass' theory, lol). I liked the dialogue between the sisters.
SaltwaterJanuary chapter 5 . 1/13/2019
Aah the confession right at the end is so cute and...cliffhanger.
SaltwaterJanuary chapter 4 . 1/13/2019
Nice chapter! It's realistic of his mom to have been waiting and have figured out what was going on. Mothers tend to.
SaltwaterJanuary chapter 3 . 6/10/2018
Sorry for the cut-off review last chapter. I accidentally hit send too early.
I think this guy is kinda obsessed suddenly, it's pretty cute, but you can also tell it may get annoying. But he means well.
Nice chapter.
SaltwaterJanuary chapter 2 . 6/10/2018
I like this chapter too, and the way things are playing out with him and her. I would also say that
mrsimera chapter 3 . 6/5/2018
Cheesy chapter lol, yeah a perfect gentleman.
If I didn't knew he is a nice man then he will looks liked a stalker to
I hope the girl is safe when she got home.
mrsimera chapter 2 . 6/2/2018
Love the guy really falling hard in love on the girl though he is oblivious to his own feelings,
He is liked a lovesick .my grammar is not
mrsimera chapter 1 . 5/29/2018
Omg so sweet and romantic, It seems at first for the guy the girl is not her ideal type but just like in a song "Love moves in a mysterious ways".Love it.
Strawberry chapter 1 . 5/27/2018
Wonderful Story. Looking forward for the next chapters!
SaltwaterJanuary chapter 1 . 5/27/2018
I like the way you wrote this. It's not over-the-top "perfect" romance that is unrealistic, but it is still sweet and cute at the same time.