Reviews for Once Upon a Summer Day |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Again, another very sweet chapter! Their feeoings for each other come off in a very cute, sincere way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a cute chapter- andI'm relieved that things look well for them. I think in part of the italics-thoughts you put third person, just to note. But other than that, it was a smooth chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the way Luke is so concerned with good impressions, while Mace is still playing hard to get. It's a good contrast, in a way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was pretty funny (though I'm not quite certain about Cass' theory, lol). I liked the dialogue between the sisters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aah the confession right at the end is so cute and...cliffhanger. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter! It's realistic of his mom to have been waiting and have figured out what was going on. Mothers tend to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry for the cut-off review last chapter. I accidentally hit send too early. I think this guy is kinda obsessed suddenly, it's pretty cute, but you can also tell it may get annoying. But he means well. Nice chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this chapter too, and the way things are playing out with him and her. I would also say that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cheesy chapter lol, yeah a perfect gentleman. If I didn't knew he is a nice man then he will looks liked a stalker to I hope the girl is safe when she got home. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the guy really falling hard in love on the girl though he is oblivious to his own feelings, He is liked a lovesick .my grammar is not |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg so sweet and romantic, It seems at first for the guy the girl is not her ideal type but just like in a song "Love moves in a mysterious ways".Love it. |
![]() ![]() Wonderful Story. Looking forward for the next chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the way you wrote this. It's not over-the-top "perfect" romance that is unrealistic, but it is still sweet and cute at the same time. |