Reviews for Unfamiliar Power
Kitsune95 chapter 1 . 6/15/2018
This is a great and interesting start!
I would have liked there to have been a bit more world-building, but I also think you did well in introducing the important/relevant parts.

It's also refreshing to read something written in the present tense - I don't find enough of those. I also like how it builds up to this moment where we might learn more about Margaret. And then ends. Great place to end, in my opinion.
Good job :)
AwkwardJello chapter 1 . 6/11/2018
I really like how suspenseful the ending was and how it leaves the reader on the edge of their seats. I also liked Margaret's show of fearlessness at the beginning of the story when she stood up to the boy. You portrayed it really well! Looking forward to the next chapter:).
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