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I'm really enjoying this so far! The first few sentences set out the scene well. You know what, I suggest that you publish your book on NovelStar. A lot of readers will love your work.

Love the entire flow of the story. Really sweet, the kind that puts a giddy smile on my face after reading. )

Oh my gosh, this is so beautiful! I think they're perfect, they balance each other out. Aleks was just captured by Corrine, why after a year tho? I just love it so much, if only I had such a skill like yours. Could you maybe- and you can say no- help me catch a reader's attention in a story? I'm kinda new, so if you could-again you don't have to- check my story out to give me tips, that would be great?