|Reviews for A Different Life|
| DannyMiles chapter 1 . 6/14
Hi. I really enjoyed this look at fame and its often unrecognised impact upon mental health. I found some phrases difficult to comprehend in their fullest aspects but most of the translation was very clear... I'd be glad to help you further with this where possible (I'm not yet a beta reader but you're welcome to send me a PM). I particularly felt that the confusing, frantic and panic-filled nature of disassociation and similar conditions was reflected in the narrator's style, as well as through the sometimes repetitious nature and growing pace of the story. I also liked that the narrator didn't have a name... this helped to endorse the idea of confused identity. I look forward to reading more from you and to corresponding if you'd like to do so.