Reviews for Work
Synthey chapter 1 . 7/1
My god you can write!
ShinichiKudo chapter 1 . 6/14
Nice
Ckh chapter 1 . 6/14
I like how you punctuate your point about work being an endless cycle by essentially making the whole poem have the same rhyme. It just says: screw you, everything will remain the same. Its depressing but I agree with you. Some of us work to ignore our problems and thats okay because running away is fine but one has to face up to the cruel truth of reality one day. I think once they do that, they'll be able to appreciate the world better, and not the facade of the world they created.