|Reviews for The Ghost In My Attic|
| Punkrock234 chapter 1 . 6/22/2018
This is a great way to write a story like this! I have also read the 2nd chapter and see how the different points of view changes, nice idea! It keeps the readers wondering and reading, while glued to their seats!
| Kayla chapter 3 . 6/22/2018
Nice! I loved the humour you put of a 13 year old. I have so many questions about Emma but I’m just gonna have to read to find out huh? Please continue!
| Marley chapter 1 . 6/22/2018
I think this is a fairly great place to end, it leaves the readers on edge, waiting to see what happens, although I Guess most people will Guess it’s the girl ghost. I would like more clearrity where and who the dialog comes from. It’s kind of confusing with the dialogs right after each other. Overall, nice job!
| Marley chapter 2 . 6/22/2018
I like the suspense created by you, with the man. I really liked it. Can’t wait to read the next chapter. Great job!
| Loenia14 chapter 1 . 6/22/2018
I think this was pretty good, especially the cliffhanger. Rino is only 13 which surprises me. I also like the way you described the scene with the can, good job!
I would love to see more of this, keep writing.
Why is he not afraid of ghosts?
| PaperAirplane chapter 3 . 6/22/2018
Ooh I like Emma so far! I hope we get to hear her backstory!
| marisnotmyname chapter 3 . 6/22/2018
This chapter is good too! I like the humour you put in there. Keep writing, and I hope your friends Sister gets well.
I have also however noticed a couple of spelling mistakes, just correct those and you’ll be good to go! Oh and please do not reply back. I didn’t have an account so I had to use my mail, but yeah. Great job!
| marisnotmyname chapter 1 . 6/22/2018
I have been recommended by a Friend, and I must say this is not bad! It’s a nice start. I’ve read many books and stories like these usually turn out pretty good. Gonna read the other chapters now, good start!
| Dark-Fire-Eyes chapter 1 . 6/20/2018
Damn man! This story is neat. I definitely see some of you in him. I liked how you had the cliffhanger at the end, smooth. You can now understand what it's like to live with 5 girls. Great job! Keep writing!