Reviews for Blood, Bone, Breath and Bile
benjywhitlock chapter 1 . 6/27/2018
Really great start for a first chapter.
strangerathome chapter 1 . 6/25/2018
Short but sweet, I like it. I'm certainly looking forward to seeing more of this. I always appreciate a character that makes an effort to keep himself safe well in advance of conflict.

I do hope that you'll explain why Aswen didn't simply use the horn to shatter the woman's skull, though.

And please, please, please don't spend the next chapter on Aswen agonizing over killing the kidnappers while fighting for his life and freedom.

Heavywordsthrown2light chapter 1 . 6/25/2018
A violent beginning, but there's quite an interesting system being established. More importantly, is the interesting ways the system is being used. I enjoy the horn, which was rather counter intuitive yet made a lot of sense. The whole scene reads like a comic book: a series of rapid fire sequences that rely mostly on sight and sound. The break neck speed makes it enjoyable to read, though not too easy to 'digest' so to speak.