Reviews for Dragons Curse
LucienArindel chapter 1 . 7/10
It was a bit of a soft opening, perhaps the wording and imagery could be a bit more engaging. Also, I wasn't very enamored by the protagonist. Since you're going with the first person point of view, I'd enjoy getting into her thoughts and perceptions of events rather than her blatant recount. Would add depth. Even so, I am intrigued and like that you started the story with action rather than world building exposition.