Reviews for Odd Boy Out
PaperAirplane chapter 20 . 10/31/2019
The last chapter was definitely rushed; I've started a new project for work and I have no time to write so I rushed an ending. I'll most likely come back to it and rewrite but that won't be for a few months. Thanks for the feedback everyone!
Guest chapter 20 . 10/28/2019
Great story and interesting plot line. But I felt that the final chapter was really rushed and didn’t tie up the story very well, explain the 2 year gap, extend their reunion, or future prospects etc. Other than that, it was a good read!
stunningaurora chapter 19 . 10/17/2019
aweee so close ahhh my heart :(((
BadReputations chapter 1 . 10/12/2019
I love the classic girl in a boys school story! And this one seems awesome
Cynthia Brent chapter 1 . 10/5/2019
This is an amazing opening chapter! Joanna practically jumps right off the page!
Ifsomethingchanged chapter 17 . 9/11/2019
I'm shook.
WindSongEnchantment chapter 16 . 8/28/2019
Aw shoot! Stupid, innocent idiot leading the bad guy right to her! I cant take the suspense!
WindSongEnchantment chapter 13 . 8/1/2019
This is beautifully done! Absolutely love it and cannot wait for more! I literally read all thirteen chapters in about two hours
Katherine Story chapter 13 . 7/30/2019
Write more! Loving the story so far!
effervial chapter 1 . 7/30/2019
Love your flow. Seriously, you’ve got a talent here! The story is interesting and so are the characters. Awesome!
Guest chapter 10 . 7/10/2019
OMG A NEW CHAPTER! Dropping a review to let you know ya girl hasn’t forgotten about you! So glad to see you’re back and posting 3 super keen for more (me need more Seth). Hope you’ve been well xx
Nble2 chapter 10 . 1/7/2019
High key obsessed with genderbender plotlines so I’m absolutely loving this! ALSO SETH OMG
Super excited to see where this goes! Xx
Guest chapter 8 . 11/10/2018
New update so soon! wow thank you so much! I like how realistically you depicted the goons as goons and I think it's funny Hal hasn't even found out that Jo got kidnapped at some point.
Guest chapter 7 . 10/17/2018
this went some weird ways! i did not expect everything! cool story! please keep it coming, kudos mate
ok tbh i was irritated by the spin the bottle scene but i guess? you go!
Guest chapter 6 . 10/12/2018
please keep writing, i love it so far and i want to know whats next
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