I love that even the ex is encouraging their relationship. I also get where Jessie is coming from with Tristian's drinking since he HAD lied to her about it, but I agree with Siren that she did overreact, so I'm glad she apologized.

The ships are sailing, and I am on board for both of them

I love the premise of this! It's such a creative take on being a security guard, and I can't wait to see how it turns out for Eala!

This story has been so beautifully written. I still want to know more about all the characters but all good stories need to finish. I'll be looking forward to anymore stories you put out. Will hold Jessie and Mischa close to my heart.

Val is so interesting, I like him a lot as a character. Hopefully things go well for them, that rival company seemed like bad news but it seems like they've been taken care of by Val and Deangelo's organization. Their relationship is so complicated I like it a lot. I wonder if Bryant will have any reaction to the situation Rayne and Tristan went through. I'm glad both kids were saved, at least Tristian has Brett to comfort him.

-Tilly~

Maybe I was too critical of Jessie's personality before, feels like she's been a bit more tame and forgiving but maybe that's just her learning and growing from her mistakes. As mad as I do get at her sometimes it's just amazing that you can invoke those feelings inside me just from reading. I don't think I've read a firey character like her before. Mischa is definietly the ice to her fire. I'm dissapointed that Bryant seems to really not be interested in Rayne anymore and that he gave up so easily. And woo for more Brett and Tristan melting more of the distance between them.

Aww, I'm glad things are working well and that Jessie is learned to step back a little. I'm really interested in the guy Rayne is in contact with. Good to see character development with everyone.

Sometimes I get so fed up with Jessica. She can be a bitch for no reason other than her prejudices. Or maybe she's just naturally hyper aggressive. It still upsets me though especially now since Rayne needs time to settle and reconnect with his brother. I'm glad there are people who try to reason with her but it doesn't stop me from wanting to punch her for being so dense and unreasonable.

I'm so glad to have found this. This was a phenomenal read. Imagine my surprise when I finished reading chapter 5 I reached over to click 'next' only to instead to re-click the '5' button instead. I'm eagerly looking forward to reading more. I love your character building and I love your characters. (Sorry if this message appears more than once. I kept trying to leave a review but the website never seems to let it stick).

I'm so glad to have found this. This was a phenomenal read. Imagine my dissapointment when I finished reading chapter 5 only to reach down to click the 'next' button when I instead clicked the '5' button instead. I'm eagerly looking forward to reading more. I love your character building and I love your characters.

I read that all way too quickly. This has be a phenomenal read. Imagine my dissapointment when I finished reading chapter 5 and pressed the 'next' button to only realize I was pressing '5' again. I can't wait to read more! I love your character building and I love your charaters.