The characters were believable and the emotions kept me involved throughout. I think it would look great in a comic book format, and I'm anxious to bring it to life.

Thank you for sharing this amazing piece, I look forward to hearing more of your stories.

Warm regards,
Addy

Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback on my writing—I'm genuinely appreciative of your kind words. It's incredibly fulfilling to hear that the depth and uniqueness of my characters resonate with you, and I’m delighted that you're enjoying the storytelling. I look forward to sharing more as my projects evolve. If you're interested, I'd be more than happy to offer some book recommendations I think you'll enjoy exploring.

As for the possibility of collaboration, it would be a true honor to work with you to bring my characters to life through your artistic talent. I would welcome the opportunity to have my creations visually interpreted iin your unique style, and I’m excited about the chance to create something truly special together.

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love this little story so much! it's my favorite of yours and i was so happy to see an update while i checked your profile after a few years off FP.

Hi! I would like to invite you to join our platform to present a good quality story to our readers! Send me a message if this offer piqued your interest!

So lovely to see the happy ending with Chris and Audrey (they’re such an amazing mature couple), but the tease with Andrew and Vi’s storyline is killing me I always check back to see if you updated both of their stories and was so happy to see this one updated. Pls keep your readers sane and update Lunch Atop a Skyscraper!

Ahhh yes! I have to admit I didn't see your last few updates (I started this years ago and loved it), and I did reread this again from the beginning today (still loved it) and love the way it's going! Lots of love going on here! I look forward to your next update!

Finally! Hooray! And we got to see the siblings reunite too :)

Thank you for the update, it's a wonderful way to start the day.

Thank you for the update.
Best Christmas present ever!
I’m still grinning. So happy for both of them.
Thanks again and looking forward to reading more of your amazing work.

This chapter made me so happy! I loved his train of thought throughout the chapter, and I especially loved the way the scene between them unfolded. Such a great treat to read at the end of the year. Thank you for the update! Hope you have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

this is so cute!

*holiday chapter.

You made a CHRISTMAS CHAPTER?!

And it’s PERFECT?!,!?

I love you.

I’ve never met you.
But I love you. Tysm.

Also just.
Sigh. [dreamily]

Never thought I’d say this but thank goodness for Henry. Ugh.

Yay! Thank you for updating! Can’t wait for the next chapter

I’m so happy that you uploaded this chapter. Can’t wait to see what she is going to do! Excited!