|Reviews for The Girl I Used To Be|
| Zukafu Chiriamoto chapter 1 . 8/9/2018
Wow, this is a stunning piece you wrote here. I'm very glad to have come across it in the 'Just In' section and finally (at long last!) made some time for it.
It was very deep stuff you discussed but it was done so beautifully. Both your word choices and your rhythm worked well and stayed remarkably consistent throughout.
And it's relatability is a little scary at times. Some of the narrator's own thoughts and feelings I can empathise with. But I think, at least for me, that's why I couldn't stop reading; why I just had to get to the end. I really had a connection to this piece. Thank you so much sharing!
| Arghyadip chapter 1 . 7/31/2018
Beautiful and deep... Closer to our hearts...
And we are always with you, no matter what - Always
| Myrkrid Veit chapter 1 . 7/26/2018
Thank you for writing and sharing your art here, it is truly beautiful in only the way life can be. This is a very relatable thing, but if you are anything like me then I wish you to know that you are never alone and it only ever takes a couple of words to garner a friend who is willing to help.
| HattieTheSwann chapter 1 . 7/23/2018
So relateable felt like this poem could see into my soul
| Synthey chapter 1 . 7/23/2018
Very sad poem but also very well written!