Reviews for What Do You Desire?
Woedin chapter 1 . 2/22
Breathtaking, personal, and very romantic. As a read, a true joy. As a thought, both warming and vexing. "Thou Shalt Not Covet." Springs to mind, But oh what it would mean, just to hear such a question proffered from ones truelove, and for that answer to be let slip, to share, and to experience, such desire defined. I think your poem, and it's fervent query, would test even the most Herculean resolve, my friend. This is the kind of poem that if made manifest, could talk a Nun from her vow, a Celibate from his oath, And make a Sailor revoke his calling! ~Bravo~