|Reviews for A Battle for Blood and Glory|
| AKrey177 chapter 1 . 8/2/2018
The way you convey the heat and the texture of the sand is good. You establish Vera's character in the face of adversity effectively. I'll be interested to read chapter 2.
Just a couple of things - where are they walking from? If they're approaching the Red Sea, are they travelling through Sinai? The second thing is that 'my mom' really jars in this context. You might want to use something less modern-sounding.
| Goonipers chapter 1 . 8/2/2018
Awww. I feel sorry for her. She's strong, but a bit resistant to sleep. Thanks for writing OK decent slave fic. I hope she escapes and lives.