|Reviews for blue|
| Chronic Guardian chapter 1 . 9/2/2018
Bluetone shading? Huh. How poetic. d(~,o)b
Buts seriously, nice way to turn the prompt into something way more amazing than the original context while still playing it to the letter. Very creative indeed!
Also should note I like a lot of your imagery here! And the narrative of parting and promise of reunion, while certainly put in soft focus, still gives the poem enough forward motion to feel like it's driving towards something. That and the second line rhyme scheme. I look forward to someday understanding the deeper context being alluded to! In the meantime, it's enough to feel contemplative and think about the ups and downs of the azure shades.
Thanks for being you're awesome self! Keep it up!