Reviews for Fire and Light
Joeson chapter 1 . 5/5
This is a pretty interesting start and you do well in describing the characters, and I'm curious to see how it all progresses. I can't help but suggest that you should join NővelStar’s writing competition, you might be their next big star.
LDF chapter 1 . 8/22/2018
For technical issues, you need to make a new paragraph when someone is speaking, or when you start a new topic. It would make things easier to read.