Man, I seriously need a back hand slap for not reading this story when it was updated a while ago. I can't believe I follow this story at one moment and then forget about it, I am so sorry my friend. And I thank you for the shoutout.

The interactions between Zac and Lucy are the strongest things that really make the story entertaining. I got a chuckle when Zac said, "You wouldn't hit a coward, would you?" and then Lucy straight up kicks him. That was a pretty well written joke.

Uh oh, I wonder what's going on with that horde of gorillas. Are they friends or are they foes? I guess I will have to wait and see what happens next. Hopefully, we'll see Ash and Michael in the next chapter. Great work, my friend! I will definitely see you next time, as I plan to take a break from my account for a bit. I need to make more original content on here.

~SD321 (SpiderDom321)

very good.

Oh dear.

Nah, this wasn’t too over the top. It’s very humorous. Cannot wait to see what happens next! Great job, keep it up!

~SD321 (SpiderDom321)

So there separated, interesting. How are they going to get back to Micheal and Ash? It is a very interesting story so far ZM.

Joshua.

Quite humorous

Oh dear, too far for Michael and Ash to find. Very good. Wonder how Ash and Michael find Zac and Lucy? 'they soon forgot their argument' ha ha.

Joshua.

I am noticing 'Up' influences here - I like it. Great and funny update! So, now Lucy and Zac have to find Michael and Ash. Is their argument going to continue?

You are funny!

Very good ZM. I like ''Now what?".

Joshua.

Oh dear, Zac. You are so dead when the others find out. I wonder where they will end up?

I like how you say ''they survived''

ha, very ha.

Excellent start! Liked the cliff hangar ending. Now that Ash knows that they are humans and not reptilians, will she turn against Zac and Michael? And is Lucy going to become good? Loving this.