| Reviews for the day everything went wrong |
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   anna Marry chapter 6 . 2/16/2022 Are you actively writing? I am so interested in your work. My name is Anna an editor for a fast growing platform. May I know how to reach you professionally? |
| PassionateStylus chapter 3 . 6/27/2021 Hahaha. Brilliant. |
| Anne Messervy chapter 5 . 3/13/2019 You are funny Z. |
| katniss15 chapter 5 . 3/11/2019 HAHAHAHA! Oh dear me. |
| High King Peter chapter 5 . 3/9/2019 LOL! Once again, absolutely hilarious! It's so stupid and over-the-top that it's damn funny. |
| Your Brother chapter 5 . 3/9/2019 Very good. Joshua. |
| Your Brother chapter 4 . 3/1/2019 HAHA! Best one yet. Wonder what will happen when Joshua tells on Paul for daring him into it. Joshua. |
| katniss15 chapter 4 . 12/31/2018 What else could possibly go wrong? |
| High King Peter the Magnificen chapter 4 . 12/30/2018 So hilarious! The day from Hell. |
| High King Peter the Magnificen chapter 3 . 12/30/2018 Oh, man! Fell sorry for the characters. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/2/2018 Hahaha. Very funny ZM. I like the line "LIFE JUST ISN'T FAIR SOMETIMES". Joshua. |
| katniss15 chapter 3 . 12/2/2018 Oh, I feel so sorry for Harold and Oliver. That would be so painful. |
| Mum chapter 1 . 11/20/2018 This is a great chapter! It's hilarious. |
| High King Peter the Magnificen chapter 2 . 11/8/2018 Oh, boy. Can't wait to read what happens next! |
| High King Peter the Magnificen chapter 1 . 11/8/2018 So funny! I love it! |