dear author, have you tried to post your stories in other platform? i am an editor and so interested in your work, may i know how to reach you professionally?

Yup. I'm reading These books again. I just love them so much.

So, humm. She's a little bit pissed. Hot damn

I like the cliffhanger, it makes me, the reader, want to read the next book all the more, so I think you should keep it the way it wow, that was some cliffhanger, but I like it

Yes, Avery is taken

Oh no Pike, Avery is with someone, don't you try it!

Blossom, love that name. And does using tepid water to warm up gradually work? And is it painful? Now I'm going to have to look that up. I liked this chapter, but I'm wanting Roedin and Avery to be back together. Can't wait for that moment.
And what age is this in?

Dsmn love her!

' "Really?" Avery said to the stick in dismay' Hahahah. I like how their connected. Two souls that had become as one, I like that.
And YOU GO Avery! SHE kicked THEIR ASS'S, WAY TO GO! LOVE THAT PART! Good job Avery. Whatever you do, don't change that part! Love it, coming from a woman just love a woman who can kick some ass!

Maybe 'She gasped as the liquid burned' maybe take out 'flesh'?
I liked the descriptions in this chapter, they give you the picture but not to much.

The formatting is off with this chapter, and the story is not complete when the status says complete. If you have 50,000 words for Book 3, I'm guessing that this Book 2 will probably be the same length as Book 1 with around 120,000 to 125,000 words in 50 chapters.

Rena and Avery have to rescue Anrika and save the humans from the inevitable war. They have to pass through the hidden forts and human preserves. When they rescue the humans in Gallens, they can use the water systems to escape. Of course, there must be dream walks with Roedin and Avery before they finally meet in the flesh but have to separate because of the war.

The great escape, there's a reason the two redheads sticked together.

This is wonderful, your writing reminds me of S.J. Maas who wrote Queen of Glass, which used to be posted here at Fictionpress. It seems there are only a few chapters to go, so this must be resolved soon. Thank you.

Go, Avery, River-Avery, go, go, go!

This is so sad once again, maybe they can still revive Cedar and find Arnica alive, thank you.