Reviews for Paris Picks
Eris chapter 1 . 2/12/2019
Very deep and a bit creepy story. Paris knows that he will die by the hands of the unchosen two gods, and now has to decide how he wants to live until his death. It’s really fascinating and gets very deep into the hearth and brain. The problem of Paris is well explained. Good story.
Sgt. Hishiro chapter 1 . 11/3/2018
The plot is interesting and the detail in which Paris’ thoughts are described is encapsulates the tension in the scene. It serves well to get the reader into his mind and know what is going on exactly in the moment. The only thing I would say to improve is that the place where this is taking place isn’t mentioned very much and this can often be a crucial detail to the understanding of the nature of events.
Sgt Hishiro