Chapter 1 reminds me of the Metallica song The Four Horsemen.

I wish I was forever young and energetic...curse you, Father Time. Excellent chapter!

~Snackasm

I have to say, this was a very interesting read and it kept my attention throughout which is sort of a difficult thing to do with myself. Keep up the good work.

~Snackasm

Very cool

Since I read it until this chapter, might as well leave a review.

I like this chapter more than the chapter 1. The first chapter was really about revenge, short, entertaining, yet the usual play of revenge (especially those of justice) However, in the second chapter, There was a bit intro, the conflict, and then the end. I don't know why but this certain short passage has somehow an attractive vibe? Not really sure.

Great Story The Ferret-Faced Man Learned The Hard Way "I Fought The Law And The Law Won".

An entertaining short story. Karma always strikes.

This is shot and sweet and fun to read. I like it. Good short story.

Interesting

Nice Halloween short