|Reviews for First Contact|
| Geethr75 chapter 3 . 12/21/2018
Loved this chapter too. You kept up the suspense. But there were a few places that seemed to be more telling than showing. I think you should consider dividing this chapter into two so you can show rather than tell. Also the end of the chapter felt abrupt rather than natural, and yes, people got back to their lives, but it doesn't leave me with a burning desire to know what happens next.
| Geethr75 chapter 2 . 12/21/2018
This is quite interesting, and I'm so eager to know what's going to happen next. I loved how it began, so simply and within no time, it has snowballed into something else.
| Geethr75 chapter 1 . 12/21/2018
This is informative I guess, but it didn't really interest me. I think you'd do better to leave this out and start with the first chapter because that was quite interesting