Reviews for Destiny
cruzyasgirl chapter 1 . 4/23
Kudos to the writer of this book. You did an amazing job. Why don't you try to join NovelStar's writing competition? You might win a prize, judging from the book I just read.
CitrusChickadee chapter 1 . 11/22/2018
An interesting start! It's short, but it still does a nice job of establishing the setting and the character's feelings on the situation. There are a few small mistakes ("I don' have a choice" should be "I don't have a choice," and "Even her is afraid" should be "Even she is afraid), but other than that, this looks pretty good so far.