Reviews for My Thanksgiving MVP
Vivienne Degran chapter 1 . 11/20/2018
Hi! I liked the dialogue you wrote between JT and Chrystene. I think it flowed really well and sounded like how teenagers would talk. You obviously know a lot about football, or high school football? We have a different kind of footy here in Australia and I've never really been that interested in sport anyway, but I wasn't bored by your descriptions in the story. I liked how your reasoning for why Chrystene decided to talk to JT said a lot about her - being more like Jesus and being kind to other people as a motivator for her tells me she's generally a good person and I'm interested to see how this holds up in situations where she might be led to feel jealous. It's time for bed now, but I'm definitely curious to keep reading!