Reviews for Natural Selection |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh no! I can't believe it's the end already! I definitely am ready for the next two books! Definitely a ton of interest for it. Don't stop writing! 3 |
![]() ![]() I want to know what happens! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ABSOLUTELY YES please post up the next two books to this! Natural Selection is by far the best story (and well-written one at that) that I've read in 2019, and I've read MANY stories in the past few months. Alice and Alexis, you two have done so well on this story. The chapters are absolutely magnificent and I don't think I can go on without hearing what becomes of [I forget his name but the dude who went into the town illegally and stayed at the yellow house] because I feel like he will come back at the perfect time later in the series and I DO NOT want to miss that. I think it is safe to say that there is an interest in the following two books... |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww noo, I feel so bad for Nate. Poor buddy never suspected a thing. Prediction for the future: Victor is immune to the disease. I feel like I shouldn't be reviewing so often (idky), but I can't help it when a story is this good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, so I guess that I know I should feel bad for Natalia feeling pushed to cut, but honestly I feel worse for Nathan. Poor guy is gonna think back on the seven years he'd lived wit Natalia without ever noticing. He'll probably be like "all the signs were there" and I just feel some real pity for him. I am looking forward to the chapter where they talk this out, and I hope that the doctor guy is there when they do because that just seems like the best option? Thanks for a great two chapters! Will be looking forward to the next |
![]() ![]() ![]() I totally enjoyed the last 5 chapters i binge read. Now im just kinda waiting for Natalia to tell Nathan and for him t . She doesn't think he will, but by golly ChemistryOfLife if you don't make Nathan understand I will absolutely lose my mind. Great work as always. Great work, better story, Papa John's. |
![]() ![]() ![]() perfectchapters as always. i honestl forgot about jeremy, so thats why i was suprised at his appearance a few chaptes ago. also im kinda afraid for the doctor check up bc i havea feeling that doc is gonna take victor's side and kinda bully natalia? sorry for the bad spelling im tiredand too lazy to go back and fix it |
![]() ![]() ![]() i cant wait. this is too good |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, uh, i think you uploaded the wrong chapter here. This was chapter like 17 or something |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this story, and I hope that Nate hurries up and finds Natalia's scars since I seriously doubt ChemistryOfLife is going to make Nat get over her scars on her own. I'm interested to see where the story goes, a bit slow, but maybe the plot will speed up. I like the character development anyway |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'll be honest, didn't think I'd like this story, but I've been looking for a good plague one for a while. I clicked and now I'm hook, line, sinker. I like it so far, but Alice, please chill on the ellipses... they are fine in writing, but good lord you are using them waaay too much. Demasiado, si? Idk if I'm supposed to like Jeremy, but I think he's pretty chill so far. He's already my second fav character and idk why; he just is. Will be awaiting the eighth chapter. :) |