Reviews for Twisted
lirianstar chapter 1 . 3/6/2019
I'm admit, the blurb got me. Twisted fairy tales? Interesting. I'll be back for more.
I like the fantasy vibe, and the first person narrative is engaging. The intro the characters made me want to read on xD

While changing povs you can separate them (line/stars etc) or use italics - for thoughts in the parts of the dialogue as well. Not necessary, but it would make it much easier.