Reviews for The circus of mystery
cruzyasgirl chapter 1 . 4/23
Not to be overreacting but you're book is totally awesome. You're innate writing skill is what the world should witness. Try joining NovelStar's writing competition because why not?
Kitsune95 chapter 1 . 1/5/2019
This is a pretty interesting start and you do well in describing the characters.
There were a lot of names thrown in though and it wasn't immediately obvious who was who.

And a word of advice, when you write dialogue, remember to start a new paragraph whenever the speaker changes. Otherwise it's difficult to know who is saying what.

This has potential though and I'm curious to see how it all progresses.