You are good at writing _ so creative gal :*

Goblin sounds interesting. I'll have to take a look.
I think my favorite line to this is "in the moon forever waiting for the sun." It has a nice feel to it, and the more I think about that line, the more I think how sad it is the moon and sun don't meet.

Anyway, that is not the point of the poem. It's just a very good line to it, in my opinion.