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Well, my suspicious about Erin and Aisha's powers have increased. I do wonder if they have an ability where if they combine each others' powers, they become stronger. Kind of like two characters from an X-Men TV show called The Gifted. Arianna seems cool too. Can't wait to find out everyone's origins. Something about superhero stories like this always makes me smile, it also gives me inspirations for my own superhero.

Totally forgot to mention Sianne in my last review. Sorry. She looks interesting and I want to know what revenge she has planned on his Kanae Allegiance (That's a cool name, by the way. Koto Allegiance sounds cool as well)

I really don't understand why this doesn't have any other reviewers. This story is simple, well-written, and sets up what's to come. Why do people not appreciate this stuff?

Anyways, I hope to see an update soon. This looks super cool! Until then, see you next time, my friend!

~SD321 (SpiderDom321)

Ohhhh… this looks interesting. So far, I like the description you gave to Coco and Keira. I am curious to know about their origins as well as their enemies. That should be pretty cool to see.

I also wonder how Erin and Aisha are going to be part of this? Could they have some secret superpowers of their own? Guess I will have to find out.

Great job so far! This looks interesting!

~SD321 (SpiderDom321)