Reviews for A Girl, a Murder and Twelve Dreadful Children
Guest chapter 22 . 9/3/2019
I'm sure that's Belfast.
On another note, I'm going to miss your writing
Guest chapter 19 . 8/15/2019
Oh wow - what a cliffhanger! I suppose we've just met Belfast of the murderous / carnivorous clicks. And Dani is unharmed...hmmm
Guest chapter 16 . 6/19/2019
I liked this longer chapter length.

Hmm, Belfast again. And LOL about Dani and Claire.
LDF chapter 1 . 3/7/2019
[The Jupiter Project had sounded like a good idea on paper. Find cures for all the world's diseases! Gain a new understanding of how the universe worked! Discover what sort of creatures lived on distant planets!]

These are all different ideas that don't really work together well. Wouldn't it make sense that each one was it's own seperate project?

Still, the content is good. Mr. Caleb's fear is palpable, and the cliffhanger is pretty creepy.
lirianstar chapter 1 . 3/5/2019

Lovely start. By that I mean absolutely fascinating, and equally insidious, of course.
"Then some genius had a bright idea..." had me cracking up xD

Waiting for more of this!