|Reviews for The Unwilling Queen (Book 3 of The Unknown Alchemist)|
| Guest chapter 78 . 5/9
Holy hell what a read.
I love your stuff.
I hope you do more.
I love this book.
And sad that I'm done with it
| HeyCharles chapter 1 . 4/11
Great job author, I really like your writing style. I suggest you join NovelStar’s writing competition, you might be their next big star.
| Reader chapter 79 . 3/12
I just came on your books and holy shit. Wow. I could not stop reading. I had to know what was going to happen to Avery and the rest of them. You are very good writer. I loved your books.
| Guest chapter 79 . 11/2/2020
Awww. I'm sad. But happy that everything is will, almost will in the end. But Avery is with her daughter her love and her family. Thank you for sharing this with us.
I'm going to read all the books again. :-D
| silverstone2828 chapter 79 . 10/25/2020
Thank you so very much for this book. It’s been a spectacular ride! I felt as though I was living in this world when I was reading each chapter. I’m looking forward to more writing from you when you’re ready!
| Moonlight chapter 79 . 10/24/2020
Nooooooo! I'm sad.
I loved this book. I miss looking forward to new chapters .
I'm going to read the books again.
| Fall Storm chapter 79 . 10/24/2020
I am so so so so very happy that Avery is okay, kind of, all things considered she's okay. I'm glad that she went back, and that she's with her family and Roden.
Wow, damn. This is the end. I'm sad that I've Finished the series.
I feel like I went on this adventure along with Avery, I feel like that we've been through thick and thin with Avery. We've been through the hard times and the good times. We have seen her struggle through her own decisions and mistakes. We have seen her fall in love. We have seen her struggle and overcome her deepest fears. We've seen her being kicked off her feet but standing taller than before. We've seen her survive through slavery and win her freedom. We have seen her become a mother. We have seen her become a mountain that never bows to the wind. We have seen her fight for her freedom and for everyone she loves. And we have seen her become a queen that will be remembered throughout the centuries to come. I well miss the river-Avery.
now I don't know what to do with myself now that I finished this. Damn.
I think Avery is a fine character. But that's my personal opinion. I like how clever she is, I also like the fact that she can stand up for herself and she can defend herself. Again my personal opinion. I do sincerely hope that you don't change her too much when you rewrite the series.
And it should be us the readers should be thinking you. Thank you for allowing us to come on the adventure. I for one enjoyed every moment of it. Every tense worried heartbreaking moment. Thank you.
| Fall Storm chapter 76 . 10/24/2020
YES! YES! WELL DONE AVERY!
| Fall Storm chapter 74 . 10/24/2020
I like how smooth this chapter was, I love the way it would shift to one person to another. You got me worried about Avery. (Come on River-Avery. You can come back. You have to, you're mate and daughter is waiting for you. Your family is waiting for you.)
I know it's dangerous, and I don't want anything to happen to
Sari but of magic is the only way to bring her back then freaking do it.
| Guest chapter 73 . 10/18/2020
I got a question that I have been wanting to ask. Who created the sky Stone?
and if Avery isn't the sky soul and how come she can use the sky Stone and no one else can?
I think she is the sky soul.
| Fall Storm chapter 73 . 10/17/2020
(I'm an alchemist. I'm a human. I'm a slave. I'm a card-shark. I'm a mother. I'm the River-Avery. I'm prime. I'm the Sky Princess.) Love that. I just love that, Because she is all those things and so much more.
I am so so so glad that my earlier theories were wrong.
This was a very intense chapter.
I hope Avery is okay. You had me worried when she was encased in that crystal. And my heart was about to shatter when Roden was trying to get to her. It was a heartbreaking scene that almost made me cry. Good job. She has to be okay. She just has to be. Roden can't lose her, I think he would lose himself right along with her.
Avery's vision crest is coming true. And so did her mother's. In away.
Wow. Just Wow. I don't know what to think. Avery isn't the sky soul? But I think in away she is. Maybe she wasn't supposed to be chosen by the gods, but by her mother, a desperate mother. And Rena was Honest with her. She did say that at 1st she was nothing but a job, But then she fell in love with Avery, and Rena became her friend, her sister, her mother.
I'm a little pissed that it was Rena's fault that Tao was killed. But It does make a lot of sense. And I know River was desperate, but how could she do that to her own daughter, her baby? By the ancestors, Avery had it bad from the very beginning. How will Avery deal with this new revelation? I'm worried that she might try to run away from it, or try to deny it even though it's true.
I am wondering though, was River crying over her supposed dead baby, or because they supposedly lost the sky soul?
And It makes a lot of sense why the old woman in that village thought that Avery was dead because Rena made her believe it.
As always, can't wait for more.
| Guest chapter 72 . 10/11/2020
Someone please, save Avery! I need more
| Fall Storm chapter 72 . 10/10/2020
Ah! I knew that the Alchemyst was trying to help them! I called it! Ah!
Damn. What a incredibly intense couple of chapters. For some reason I really like chapter 72. The descriptions really painted a picture in my head. And the description with Avery's hair floating and reflecting light in the water. I really like that part. And the way that you wrote chapter 72, it made it feel like it was like Avery talking to us. I don't know if that's what you were going for but that's what I read off of it.
The power that hazel has now is bad ass! Love it! You had me worried there for a bit. It's a good thing that Skye took the potion when he did. Because if he hadn't he would probably be dead. Then I would be very very upset. Lol. No, seriously, Skye is one of my favorite characters.
I am extremely curious who was making Avery see the images of the cabin. I have a few suspicions but I'm not quite sure. But I sincerely hope that I am wrong. I really really don't want to be right. I have three people in mind who it could be. One, I wouldn't be too surprised. But it's the other too that I'm expecting it to be that I'm hoping that I'm wrong about.
The first person I think it is Safira. Which would not surprise me at all if she's still alive. Sense her death is here say, We didn't really actually see her die.
The second. I know it's a bit of a over stretch, and its very likely that I'm wrong about it. But Adelyn. I know, not likely. And if so, I hope I am very very wrong. Because I think that betrayal would be too deep and scarring, Not even Avery could heal from.
And finally the 3rd and final person I think it is. Again, bit of a over stretch, And probably not likely. But Rena. I don't really know why I expect it's Rena. But Rena didn't have strong power. That we knew of. But I don't really expect that it's her. I hope. Again the betrayal would be to deep into scarring for Avery to come back from. And she was killed, well not tentely, killed by the curse.
To be honest it'd be either one of the three that I mentioned and it would still be a shock. But it's most likely Sarck or Safira.
And I so want a beautiful moment between Avery and Roden. I so want him to wake her up from the spell. Then I want him to scoop her up in his arms and fly her into the sunset to they're happy ever after. What I'm trying to say is that I hope that everything turns out alright In the end of this. And I really hope that Avery and Roden have they're happy ending with their daughter. For the love of the ancestors, they deserve happiness. Lol.
As always, can't wait for more.
Your fan. Hugs.
| Guest chapter 70 . 10/8/2020
I need more
| Moonlight chapter 70 . 10/6/2020
Someone! Please! Avery!